| A thesis reminder is a
direct echo of the
thesis statement. In a short paper, the topic
sentence of each paragraph should repeat words or
phrases from the thesis statement. No matter how
good your thesis, your writing is worth little if it
does not cohere (hold together) and demonstrate to
the reader how each new point advances the main
idea. You can accomplish both goals by providing
your reader with thesis reminders.
Note: A long, complex paper will have
a long, complex thesis statement, with many
supporting points that must themselves be
supported. Points which are too complex to be
handled in a single paragraph should be treated
almost like a small, embedded paper, with its
own local thesis statement and blueprint, tied
together by local thesis reminders.
A good thesis sentence has three main parts: the
limited subject (what your paper is about), the
precise opinion (what you're trying to say about
that subject), and the
blueprint (a brief outline of how you're going
to support your claim). (See: "Thesis
Statements")
limited Here are two examples of using the
thesis and the
blueprint to
maintain coherence.
Example 1
Thesis Statement:
Restoring old houses is rewarding
because it is
exciting, relaxing, and satisfying.
Topic Sentence #1 with reminder
Part of the
reward in restoring old
houses lies in the
excitement
of discovering the original interior.
Topic Sentence #2 with reminder:
Not only is there
excitement
in restoring old houses,
but working with one's hands is
relaxing.
Topic Sentence #3 with reminder:
However
excited and relaxed you may
be when you have finished
restoring your house,
nothing beats the
satisfaction found in viewing the
completed project.
Example 2:
Thesis Statement:
Becoming a ski patroller turned out to be harder
than I thought because of
the studying,
the
skiing, and
the time demands.
Topic Sentence #1 with reminder:
The first
hurdle to becoming a ski
patroller was the amount of
studying required to
learn the medical terms, symptoms and
signs, and treatments.
Topic Sentence #2 with reminder:
It
isn't enough to pass the first aid
and CPR exams; a ski
patroller also has to train for and
demonstrate skiing
proficiency and toboggan handling on
the slope.
Topic Sentence #3 with reminder:
Studying and ski training are
both very time
consuming, yet, even after
ski patrollers
pass all the exams, they still
must commit
themselves to skiing many hours regardless of
the weather or snow conditions.
You Don't Need Exactly Three Points!
If you are writing a more complex essay, you may
use a different format, but you still must include
blueprints and reminders.
For example, a critical essay may have a thesis,
antithesis, and a synthesis. The antithesis
presents all the arguments against your thesis, and
a synthesis is a kind of compromise, in which you
attempt to prove that, whatever points your
opponents might have in their favor, your thesis
still stands.
Each of these sections may have 3 or more points,
which are united by local blueprints and local
reminders, capped off by local conclusions, and
worked into by the tapestry of the whole argument. |