Most writers find the conclusion difficult to write,
but there are some things you can do to help you develop a strong ending
for your essay.
First ask yourself a few questions:
- Would my reader appreciate a summary or find it
unnecessary?
- Would a restatement of the thesis provide
emphasis or dramatic effect? Or would it seem lazy and boring?
- Can I close with an overall reaction?
- What ideas related to my thesis do not appear
in my introduction or body? Would closing with any of these ideas
help my reader appreciate the significance of my topic or advance my
purpose?
- Can I draw any conclusion from the points of my
body paragraphs to help fulfill my purpose or to help my reader
appreciate my view?
By answering these questions, you may discover a
workable approach for your conclusion. The final impression you
leave with your reader will significantly influence your reader's
reaction, so your conclusion must be carefully crafted.
Here are a few techniques to consider:
Leave the Reader with an
Overall Reaction
With this approach, you will pull out some overriding impression,
observation, or reaction from the major points of the essay. You
will leave the reader with a final sense of how you feel about the
topic.
Summarize the Main Points
of the Essay
This technique is straightforward. You will recap the major ideas
presented in the essay. The caution here is that sometimes this can seem
redundant. If you have written a short essay (anything less that 10
pages is short) with easily understood and easily remembered ideas, your
reader does not need a summary and may grow annoyed at the unnecessary
repetition. However, if your essay has many complex ideas, you reader
might appreciate a summary at the end.
Introduce a Related Idea
Sometimes an effective conclusion can include an idea not appearing
elsewhere in the essay. The caution here is that the idea must be
clearly and closely related to the ideas that appear in the body of the
essay, or the reader will be caught off guard by an idea that seems to
pop up out of nowhere.
Make a Determination
Often, the ideas presented in the essay will lead to some
significant point or determination. When this is the case, the
conclusion can be used to state and explain that point.
Restate the Thesis or
Another Portion of the Introduction
You can conclude an essay by repeating the thesis or another part of
the introduction. There are a couple of cautions here. If you restate
the thesis, you need to do so in a different way. Don't just copy and
paste the same sentence you used in the introduction. The restatement is
best used to achieve a dramatic effect that comes from repetition. A
variation on this is if you start your introduction with some kind of a
narrative, and you come back to that narrative in the conclusion. This
can create an nice "bookend" effect that ties the essay
together.
Combine Approaches
Your conclusion can combine two or more strategies. Any combination
is possible!
A Few Things to Avoid
There are a number of common problems that you can avoid if you take
the time to put your conclusion together carefully.
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Don't use cliche expressions such
as "In conclusion" or "To summarize." Your essays
are going to be short. It will be obvious that you are coming to the
end. You don't need to make a big announcement. Your readers are not stupid--they can see this is the conclusion.
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Don't conclude with an apology or
qualifying remark that undermines the readers' confidence in what they
just read. You have just as much right as anyone to state your
opinion, so don't apologize for what you have written.
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Don't make unfulfilled claims for
your thesis. Chances are what you have written about does not have
global significance, so don't imply that the world will come to an end
if your opinions are not acted upon.
You should take as much care with the
conclusion of your essay as with the introduction. Don't procrastinate to
the point that you have to whip the conclusion off in the last 10 minutes
before you have to turn the paper in.
For more information on conclusions,
check out these useful websites.
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