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Five Paragraph Essay Sample
The Hazards of
Moviegoing
By
John Langan
From College Writing Skills with
Readings
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Introductory paragraph
(Thesis)
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I am a
movie fanatic. When friends want to know what picture won
the Oscar in 1980 or who played the police chief in Jaws,
they ask me. My friends, though, have stopped asking me if I
want to go out to the movies.
The problems in getting to the
theater, the theater itself, and the behavior of some
patrons are all reasons why I often wait for a movie to show
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First
supporting paragraph |
First of
all, just getting to the theater presents difficulties.
Leaving a home equipped with a TV and a video recorder isn't
an attractive idea on a humid, cold, or rainy night. Even if
the weather cooperates, there is still a thirty-minute drive
to the theater down a congested highway, followed by the
hassle of looking for a parking space. And then there are
the lines. After hooking yourself to the end of a human
chain, you worry about whether there will be enough tickets,
whether you will get seats together, and whether many people
will sneak into the line ahead of you.
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Second
supporting paragraph |
Once you
have made it to the box office and gotten your tickets, you
are confronted with the problems of the theater itself. If
you are in one of the run-down older theaters, you must
adjust to the musty smell of seldom-cleaned carpets. Escaped
springs lurk in the faded plush or cracked leather seats,
and half the seats you sit in seem loose or tilted so that
you sit at a strange angle. The newer twin and quad theaters
offer their own problems. Sitting in an area only
one-quarter the size of a regular theater, moviegoers often
have to put up with the sound of the movie next door. This
is especially jarring when the other movie involves racing
cars or a karate war and you are trying to enjoy a quiet
love story. And whether the theater is old or new, it will
have floors that seem to be coated with rubber cement. By
the end of a movie, shoes almost have to be pried off the
floor because they have become sealed to a deadly compound
of spilled soda, hardening bubble gum, and crushed Ju-Jubes.
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Third
supporting paragraph |
Some of
the patrons are even more of a problem than the theater
itself. Little kids race up and down the aisles, usually in
giggling packs. Teenagers try to impress their friends by
talking back to the screen, whistling, and making what they
consider to be hilarious noises. Adults act as if they were
at home in their own living rooms and comment loudly on the
ages of the stars or why movies aren't as good anymore. And
people of all ages crinkle candy wrappers, stick gum on
their seats, and drop popcorn tubs or cups of crushed ice
and soda on the floor. They also cough and burp, squirm
endlessly in their seats, file out for repeated trips to the
rest rooms or concession stand, and elbow you out of the
armrest on either side of your seat.
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Concluding
paragraph |
After
arriving home from the movies one night, I decided that I
was not going to be a moviegoer anymore. I was tired of the
problems involved in getting to the movies and dealing with
the theater itself and some of the patrons. The next day I
arranged to have cable TV service installed in my home. I
may now see movies a bit later than other people, but I'll
be more relaxed watching box office hits in the comfort of
my own living room.
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Outline for a
Five-Paragraph Essay
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Title: ____________________
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Introduction
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Introductory statement
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Thesis statement: ____________________
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Body
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First Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
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Second Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
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Third Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
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Conclusion
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Closing statement
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Restate thesis: ____________________
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Sample Outline for a Five-Paragraph Essay
This is in relation to
"The Hazards of Movie going"
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Title:
The
Hazards of Moviegoing
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Introduction
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Introductory statement
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Thesis statement:
I like watching movies but I prefer watching
them at home.
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Body
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First Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
just getting to the theater presents
difficulties
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bad weather
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long drive and limited parking space
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long waiting to buy ticket
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Second Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
facing the problems of the theater itself
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old theater's problems such as smelly
carpet, worn-out seat, etc
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new theater's problems such as smaller size,
noise from next movie theater, etc
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both floors will be rubber-like dirty at the
end of the movie
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Third Supporting Idea (Topic Sentence):
Some of the patrons are annoying
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bad behavior such as running, talking loud,
etc
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human noise and disturbance
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Conclusion
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Closing statement
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Restate thesis:
I prefer to watch movies at home where it is
comfortable, clean and safe.
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